This is a good guide, I used to use this method on a different website actually, sorry if i dont critque you properly. =\, Well i shall critque this!! ^^

I like the idea, one has been needed for a long time, And it teaches well, There is a Spelling mistake in there tho ^^, but not too much to worry about.

Overall good job! ^^ Its neatly presented.

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thanx and sorry about the spelling misktake, i cant spell that well lol

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Excellent guide!

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he he! amen to this! i did one of these for commenting poetry and prose people do seem to be rather clueless. the one comment i despise on a pic of mine is 'wow. crazy.'
that's all it was!
i hope some more people read this!!
good job on it, some useful info

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thankies glad you like it

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You skipped one crucial point - as you critique a photo you want to be thinking about what the artist intended to do. See the general effect they were trying for, and THEN critique. Otherwise you'll find yourself wasting time. I favorited a macro shot of a bluish pinecone with needles radiating outwards and towards the photographer. The focus softened at the edges as the pine needles drew towards the camera, which drew the eye naturally (with both selective focus and leading lines) to the pine cone - the intended subject - and I complimented her on the depth of field effect she created. The poster above her complained that focus was off, where it was quite sharp on the pinecone and softened at the edges.

For the most part, this guide offers good points! Hopefully it'll be a step towards educating the masses.

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ahh yes! i read it so many times and i new i had forgot something i just couldnt work out what it was!
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A useful tutorial at last. I think this is a very useful piece of infromation. Now I'm going to critique it . Ireally like the idea behind it,and if people read it, it will benefit them greatly. I think however that it looks quite dull and uninviting to read. I suggest that you use a less harsh type font, as the font you've used (I guess Times Roman) seems a bit spiky and like the sort of thing you'd find in an office from a typewriter. I suggest you use Ariel or Courier Sans which are more rounded and friendlier on the eyes. I also think that it looks a bit odd with all the green ssquiggly lines under some of the words (presumably from grammar). I think it is very distracting. The actual piece though is very interesting and with a bit of cosmetic changes should be a DD.

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